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to verb or not to verb

Posted on January 18, 2021 by susannaevanspfw

Shi was sitting on the patio and every now and then, he would smile at something. Shi sat in on the patio and every now and then, he smiled. Shi reclined on a chaise on the patio, and every now and then, he smiled. Not the best sentence to edit, I know. I took it … Continue reading to verb or not to verb

Intros and all that…

Posted on January 5, 2021January 4, 2021 by susannaevanspfw

Zach Memories of that night were filtered on the smoke from my exhale, making me the one-man audience in a farce of my own creation. Two whole months of my allowance wasted on a one night stand that did not live up to expectations. Inhalation brought the wispy images again, and that time they were … Continue reading Intros and all that…