So, you've written a beautiful first chapter and have the hook that first sentence needs to be to pull the reader in and keep them going, but your following sentence is dangling there. It's a description and a continuation of the sentence before. And then you have a new paragraph. You've moved on to the … Continue reading Tips for new writers- Sentence fragments
Hello! So, things have been crazy around here and there's so much to tell you! First I want to say that I hope everyone is doing good and that February is treating you good. I've been working hard on getting book 5 done for the Gemini Deiux series, and I have a release date- March … Continue reading News
Not really sure what the difference is between a group and a page, but my poor little Facebook page has 53 followers. Sad, I know. Someone suggested that a group was better, so I said what the hell? I'll create a group. And now I have one, with 2 members. Me, and me. woohoo. I … Continue reading I Created A Facebook Group
The wind was blowing hard as he walked down the sidewalk, and he shoved his hands into his pockets to stave off the chill. In the midst of drenching heat, came the storms, and he was hurrying towards the destination the colors had given him. Time wasn’t on his side anymore, and he didn’t get to … Continue reading What’s Your Style?
Shi was sitting on the patio and every now and then, he would smile at something. Shi sat in on the patio and every now and then, he smiled. Shi reclined on a chaise on the patio, and every now and then, he smiled. Not the best sentence to edit, I know. I took it … Continue reading to verb or not to verb
Zach Memories of that night were filtered on the smoke from my exhale, making me the one-man audience in a farce of my own creation. Two whole months of my allowance wasted on a one night stand that did not live up to expectations. Inhalation brought the wispy images again, and that time they were … Continue reading Intros and all that…